Wednesday, 24 July 2013

IN CONCERT



(I)

A seated study
Blurred still
String-hardened fingertips
Taloned
Slide like live china
Along the frets
Skill
Intent and long
Refined in the bones

 
*
 
Astride
And stomping
To beat of skins
Plectrum
In nicotine grip
Skids primal
As loins grind
Soul
Improvises from the heart
And through the boot-heel

(II)

Wing-collared
And funereal
Grand Master
Undertakes classics
Patient eyes
Follow pale hands
Which instruct
Patent feet
Embalming old symmetries
                                                                        Note for note

*

Open-necked
And pounding
Holy Roller
Rocks his pulpit
Accusing fingers
Vamp and stab
Brimstone chords
Smoke and roar
Pushing the crescendo
Further every time

(III)

Eyes on dots
White-gloved
Sniper
In the distance
Surveys his tools
Waits for his moment
Measures his beat
Selects and strikes
Steadies the vibrations
Replaces and reloads


*
 
Eyes wild
As sticks are twirled
Tossed and snatched
Above volleys of sound
Power
Locked with bass
Blizzard of cymbal
And crash of pedal
Rolling with thunder
The avalanche of beats

                                                                            (IV)

Muscular larynx
Flexes
Perfect diction
From banal libretto
Takes up positions
On polished stages
From rich boxes
The elite rise
In measured ovation


*
 
Leathery throat
Convulses
Slangy melismas
From juvenile lyric
Hips jerk
Almost sacrificial
On sweaty boards
At brandished mike
Surging crowd
Whoop tribal

 
(1989)


I hope this poem doesn’t give the impression that I don’t like classical music – because I do (a fair bit of it, at least). In a live context though, it can seem rather clinical and stilted compared to rock music.

I’m not certain I had particular musicians in mind when I wrote this, but the classical guitarist is probably Julian Bream who I remember seeing quite often on TV. The rock singer looks like it might be Mick Jagger. The rock piano, however, is definitely being played by Jerry Lee Lewis and the rock drummer simply has to be Keith Moon. I doubt whether he was always ‘Locked with bass’ because he may not have been the best technical drummer ever, but he was surely the most exciting. I did think about adding pictures of the musicians to each of the verses, but decided to let the poem work on its own terms and play upon the reader's imagination.


 

Saturday, 13 July 2013

UNDERRATED ALBUMS # 17


With its major chords, rising choruses, close harmonies and sparkling guitars, there’s more than enough sunshine here to banish any rainy day.’

Rainy Day Music (2003)
by The Jayhawks


The Jayhawks are usually described as an Alt-Country, Americana or Folk Rock act. All of those labels fit a band who might feasibly be regarded as heirs to The Eagles - but for the sharp contrast in their career trajectories. Apart from having their avian monickers in common*1, the two bands are worlds apart in terms of units shifted. Of  The Jayhawks eight albums since 1986, only one has reached the Top 40 of either the US or UK charts (their 2011 reunion record, Mockingbird Time crept to # 38 in America). The Eagles did rather better: virtually all of their albums, including live sets and compilations, sold like proverbial hot cakes – Their Greatest Hits (1971-1976) has jockeyed for the title of Best Selling Album Of All Time, not to mention a score of hit singles including half a dozen # 1’s (whereas The Jayhawks have never had a proper hit). However, in that alternative universe that I sometimes allude to in this series of reviews, I like to think that The Jayhawks are a serious commercial proposition.
 
In the real world, the Jayhawks albums that seem to be most highly rated critically, are Hollywood Town Hall (1992) and Tomorrow The Green Grass(1995), both of which featured Mark Olsen sharing co-writer and co-lead vocal duties with Gary Louris. Olsen then left, only returning with another former member, Karen Grotberg for the aforementioned Mockingbird Time*2. In between, the band, now led by Louris as chief songwriter as well as lead singer and guitarist, inclined more towards Rock with Sound Of Lies (1997) and Pop with Smile (2000).

All of these records are good, but the next in the sequence may be The Jayhawks’ best. It was to be their last until the reunion some eight years later.

Louris, Perlman, McCarthy, O'Reagan
Hailed by some as ‘a return to roots’, Rainy Day Music with its austere cover art and ’stripped down’ sound, is certainly a more basic production than its predecessor, Smile. Apart from their very early work though, Jayhawks albums tend to have a trademark character of well crafted County Rock songs which they only occasionally diverge from – and then not by very far.Anyway, more basic the album may be, but it’s not for the lack of musicians or voices. Apart from the band themselves, we find busy sessioneer Richard Causon on assorted keyboards, famous-name juniors, Jakob Dylan and Chris Stills joining alt-rock popster Matthew Sweet on various backing vocals, and lo and behold: is it a Byrd? Is it an Airplane? No, it’s an Eagle! Bernie Leadon, no less, playing banjo on one track. Then there’s multi-instrumentalist producer, Ethan Johns on everything else.

‘Stumbling Through The Dark’ bookends the programme (opening up and being  reprised with a slower, acoustic version at the end). Co-written by Louris with Sweet, it’s a sprightly, bittersweet love song about a ‘little girl’ who is so much in love that ‘it’s a crime’. It is followed by the ironically uplifting  ‘Tailspin’, a vague tale about a defendant on trial who is ‘going down, baby baby’ for all of ‘fifteen years’. The fine ensemble harmonies and string-playing, feature Stephen McCarthy’s twinkling steel guitar, Leadon’s banjo and the power-chording of Louris, belie the dark lyric.

At this point, it might be as well to warn listeners not to expect too much from the words in most Jayhawks songs: they’ve never really been the band’s strong point. Interesting ideas are often expressed cryptically and left hanging undeveloped. On the first track they even manage to audibly confuse preceded with ‘proceeded’ – an error which you’d have thought might have been corrected by the combined intellects of producer, Johns and executive producer, Rick Rubin – but, hey, in a world where accept and except are now epidemically muddled all over the media, what can you expect? (Get on with it! Ed.)

Fortunately, the overall effect of the harmonies and melodies tend to render the lyrical weaknesses incidental and unimportant. The nebulous theme of crime continues in ‘All The Right Reasons’ with its narrator ‘dreamin’ how it’s gonna be the day that I am free’ (although later we’re told that he’s ‘outside lookin’ in’) to join his ‘morning star’. Again though, the hushed, yearning melody carries the song through. ‘Save It For A Rainy Day’ is a better effort lyrically, about ‘Marina’, a woman ‘lookin’ like a train wreck / Wearing too much make-up’ with a ‘Pretty little hair-do [that] don’t do what it used to’. As with so many of their songs, the musical structure is tight and there is usually an appealing solo somewhere along the line; in this case on a harmonica.

The nostalgic ‘Eyes Of Sarahjane’ goes downhill after evocative opening verses:

                                 Warwick hotel
                                 I remember it well
                                 We lived a dream so sweet, so sweet.

                                 I see Philly in the snowy gloom,
                                 We could have laid there ‘til afternoon,
                                 Our cut runs deep, so deep, so deep’

But the rest of it is sustained by its clanging guitar riff, rocky solo and the Hammond organ that trickles through it.

A pump organ underpins ‘One Man’s Problem’, which features another crunching guitar riff and a narrator struggling to reconcile himself to a lost love:

                                 ‘I heard she went out to celebrate;
                                 Three cheers for her brilliant escape
                                 From the prison we were in.’

‘Don’t Let The World Get In Your Way’, the first of two fine songs on the album written and sung by drummer Tim O’Reagan, is one of those time-to-move-on numbers. Cloaked in shadowy string effects, it may bring to mind The Beatles and Neil Young, who are both often cited as influences on The Jayhawks.
 
There’s a feeling with some listeners that the album goes slightly downhill from about here at half-way in, but I don’t subscribe to that point of view. Rather, I consider Rainy Day Music to be an impressively consistent piece of work. Some might say it is a little samey in terms of style and tempo; others may say it all hangs together really well: take your pick. 

Louris & Rickenbacker
‘Come To The River’ rocks in convincingly (despite another obscure lyric) with steel guitarist McCarthy again on good form. He and O’Reagan harmonise closely with Louris on ‘Angelyne’ which, like many tracks here, could have you singing along on first listen. The lap-steel laden ‘Madman’ invokes the spirit of Crosby, Stills & Nash whilst the disillusioned ballad ‘You Look So Young’ highlights Louris on a lead guitar worthy of either Don Felder or Joe Walsh.

The album closes with O’Reagan’s melancholy road song, ‘Tampa To Tulsa’, which is the sort of performance that fellow Minnesotans, Low specialise in; and bassist Marc Perlman’s elegiac ‘Will I See You In Heaven?’*3.

Paradoxically, this collection of sad songs is so tunefully crafted and winningly performed that they raise the listener’s spirits. Full of major chords, rising choruses, close harmonies and sparkling guitars, there’s more than enough sunshine here to banish any rainy day. And don’t pay too much mind to my quibbling over the lyrics  - after all, isn’t it true that a vast amount of high-quality pop songs get by the ears with an absence of poetry and only a passing acquaintance with what they mean. Believe me, you’ll be singing along with these songs long before you bother your head with what they’re actually about.  

 
N. B,

*1 – There is actually no such bird as a jayhawk, although the compound word has several applications in America.

*2 – Olsen and Louris released the album Ready For The Flood in 2009 as a duo.

*3 – The original release of the album came with a six track bonus disc featuring a Gary Louris solo live version of ‘Waiting For The Sun’ from Hollywood Town Hall; alternate mixes of ‘All The Right Reasons’ (led by accordion) and a quieter, slower ‘Tampa To Tulsa’; and three songs that didn’t quite make the cut: ‘Fools On Parade’, another jaded road song, and demo’s of ‘Say Your Prayers’ and ‘Caught With a Smile On My Face’, both of which stand up well.

 

 

 

 

Friday, 5 July 2013

UNDERRATED ALBUMS # 16

'a catalytic release [which]
provided the impetus for
Dylan's second most
prolific period.'

Planet Waves (1974)
by Bob Dylan

‘We have much to talk about
And much to reminisce,
It sure is right
On a night like this.’
 
 (On A Night Like This)

The original title for this album was to be ‘Ceremonies Of  The Horsemen’, a vague but evocative phrase drawn from the 1965 love song for Dylan’s first wife, Sarah (‘Love Minus Zero / No Limit’). Then again, his monochromatic painting on the front cover bears two other legends: ‘Moonglow’ and ‘Cast-Iron Songs & Torch Ballads’. I believe either of these would have been an improvement on the abandoned title or its equally vague replacement.

Nothing much is revealed from gazing at the three heavily daubed figures huddled in the picture – one, or all of them may resemble Dylan and might represent a gathering of selves ready for the journey ahead, back out into the hurly-burly of  the world of performing and touring after more than three years of relative inactivity. The four motifs in the picture: an anchor, a heart on a sleeve, a CND symbol and what looks like a lantern, resonate with themes arising from the songs, the painting itself and the artist’s somewhat breathlessly scribbled liner note on the back cover.

I won’t attempt a literary analysis of this other than to mention that it is pretty much of a piece with Dylan’s other sleeve-notes (apart from the unexpectedly crude references to ‘bar stools that stank from sweating pussy’ and ‘space guys off-duty with big dicks’). A nostalgia for what he calls ‘the gone world’ chimes with some of the songs and the opening proclamation, ‘Back to the Starting Point!’ cuts two ways: the walk down Memory Lane but also the return to The Road.

For Planet Waves marks not only Dylan’s first proper album since 1970 – and the first of his brief sojourn on the Asylum label before returning to Columbia for good a year later – but also his commitment to play live again, which , apart from the odd guest-spot, he hasn’t done since 1966.

So this record was a catalytic release.  It provided the impetus for Dylan’s second most prolific period, starting a run of seven studio albums in less than eight years and did well on the charts reaching #1 in the US and #7 in the UK. It also features, in ‘Forever Young’, one of his best loved songs. Why then did Planet Waves so quickly become an almost forgotten item in Dylan’s back catalogue?

Well, to begin with, it stands in the immediate and very long shadow cast by the album which followed it just a year later, the rightly celebrated Blood On The Tracks.

Then, critics nitpicked about the production sound and have tended to skim over it on their way to discussing the massively successful comeback tour with The Band - as encapsulated in the live album, Before The Flood - all of which took place in 1974, with Blood On The Tracks straining at the leash for release the following January.

Dylan was busy being born, shaking the dust off his feet and not looking back. Apart from ‘Forever Young’, which was the only song from the album he was still playing as the tour reached its end, he has only very rarely included selections from Planet Waves in his numerous concerts down the years. Neither has he remarked upon the record much in interviews beyond a few throw-away comments in the booklet which accompanied the Biograph (1985) compilation (i.e. ‘On A Night Like This’ – ‘not my type of song, I think I just did it to do it’; ‘You Angel You’ - ‘sounds to me like dummy lyrics’; ‘Forever Young’ – ‘I wrote it thinking about one of my boys…not wanting it to be too sentimental…the lines…were done in a minute…the song wrote itself.’).
 
The critics' grumbling about the supposedly slipshod production of the record - it was apparently helmed by Rob Fraboni, assisted by Robbie Robertson and probably Dylan himself - need not concern us here. Suffice to say that, compared to the glitzy bounce of those contemporaneous trends of Glam Rock and Disco, Planet Waves probably does seem a rather low-key affair, but that never spoilt my appreciation of it - and it almost certainly won't affect yours either.  

When we consider the eleven songs on the album, we find all but one of them to be love songs, more or less: romantic, sexual, marital, paternal and unrequited love. The song that failed to make the cut, ‘Nobody ‘Cept You’ (which later appeared on The Bootleg Series 1-3) is another one. It apparently worked well live but was never nailed in the studio. The out-take features Robbie Robertson pottering around on the wah-wah pedal to no great effect. Robertson’s playing on the official tracks however, is beyond reproach.

This, incidentally, is the only Dylan album that The Band play on as a unit apart from the live album that followed it and The Basement Tapes (1975) which came out the next year but were, of course, recorded much earlier. They knit together the fabric of the songs in a way that is both tight and subtle. ‘On A Night Like This’, though, is mainly about Dylan’s harmonica playing which, unusually, operates not merely as the lead instrument but as constant thread dubbed behind the vocals. Zipping smartly in to get the record underway, it’s a simple but highly effective starter which rides the lyrical conceit of lovers making hot whoopee beside a log fire, whilst outside in the snow, ‘the four winds blow / Around this old cabin door’.

This upbeat mood is promptly arrested by the cautionary ‘Going, Going, Gone’, the album’s only non-love song. Here we find the narrator ‘at the top of the end…closin’ the book’ and determined to ‘cut loose / Before it gets too late’. This can be tellingly interpreted as Dylan resolving to come out of semi-retirement, make music again and hit the road. And what music! Richard Manuel’s piano carries the rhythm with Garth Hudson’s organ whispers eerily in the background, but it’s Robertson’s climbing, spindly notes and plunging accent chords that truly compliment Dylan’s terrific vocal. He is grimly set on a course and ‘don’t really care / What happens next’. The rising bridge urges him to ‘follow your heart’ but also warns ‘Don’t you and your one true love ever part’.


Mr. & Mrs. Dylan with Mr. & Mrs. Cash
It’s a great song and one of Dylan’s best of the period. Naturally, it has been seen to implicitly reference his then wife, Sarah, and her fairly well known doubts and fears about his re-entering the rock and roll fray. However much those of us who write about Dylan should heed his oft-repeated scorn at the idea of hanging his songs from the branches of what is known or surmised about his life, there are certain songs which are reasonably unambiguous. I think this is one of those songs (and, of course, ‘Sarah’, from Desire (1976), less contentiously, would be another).       

Is the next song, ‘Tough Mama’, also ‘about’ Sarah? Well, epithets like ‘Sweet Goddess’ and ‘Silver Angel’ match the rather cloying terms like ‘Radiant Jewel’ and ‘Scorpio Sphinx’ which I feel slightly undermine the otherwise eloquent Desire song.

Anyway, whoever ‘Tough Mama’ is, Dylan tells her in the third verse that ‘you know who you are and where you’ve been’. The hyperbole above is also offset by a lyrical flash which brings the sleeve-note back to mind when the weather is described as ‘a-hotter than a crotch’…The lyric, which, but for those epithets, might almost come from Highway 61, seeks to persuade the woman to stick by him and, in the song’s last line, meet him ‘at the border late tonight’ (where, presumably, the tour-bus awaits). Musically it’s a rollicking track with The Band’s fine ensemble backing Dylan’s raucous harmonica. Robert Christgau probably had this track in mind when he grinningly refers to the ‘scrawny, cocky…stray cat music’ to be found in parts of the album.

So who might ‘Hazel’ be then, with her memorably ‘dirty blonde hair’ and ‘stardust in her eye’? An old flame from way back when, maybe? Who cares? It’s a wonderful little love song, elevated by the warm, wistful vocal and another soaring bridge (listen to the way Dylan sings ‘up on a hill’). Perhaps the key point here is that Hazel is ‘goin’ somewhere and so am I’.

Whoever the woman is in ‘Something There Is About You’, she makes Dylan nostalgic for his pre-fame past and ‘brings back a long-forgotten truth’:

            ‘Thought I’d shaken the wonder and the phantoms of my youth
            Rainy days on the Great Lakes, walkin’ the hills of old Duluth

Naturally, critics have seized upon this almost Wordsworthian couplet because of its frank mention of Dylan’s home town (he ‘who’s so good with words and at keeping things vague’ as Joan Baez put it in her great song about him, ‘Diamonds & Rust’). The woman in this song also seems to have saved him from the vertiginous and excessive stardom of his past:

            ‘I was in a whirlwind, now I’m in some better place’

He’s grateful but not grateful enough to ‘promise to be faithful’. It’s a hard, honest admission and anchors this torch-song with chilling cast-iron. Musically, Dylan again leads The Band with strong vocal and harmonica performances although the pretty melody doesn’t go anywhere much.

And so to ‘Forever Young’ - so good they included it twice. Then there are three other official versions: a solo acoustic rendition from Biograph; a version with The Band on their valedictory live album, The Last Waltz (1978); and another live cut from Bob Dylan At Budokan (1979). All of these have much to recommend them but, of the five, my favourite is probably the Last Waltz one with Robertson pulling out all the stops, his stratocaster stratospherically epic).

It is the big song on Planet Waves and one which his audiences will always crave to hear - along with ‘Blowin’ In The Wind’ and ‘Like A Rolling Stone’ et al. In a 2005 poll of musicians and house writers on ‘Mojo’ magazine, ‘Forever Young’ is the only track from Planet Waves to figure in their Top 100 Dylan songs (albeit at only # 44…).



Dylan’s poet pal, Allen Ginsberg loved it, recommending it as a latter-day national anthem for America. I used to lullabye my children with it and there was a large copy of the lyric pinned to my daughter’s bedroom wall alongside the alphabet and number freizes and my wife is currently cross-stitching it as a kind of birth sampler for a new niece of ours It’s that kind of song – and yet, lyrically it’s little more than a collection of clichés and platitudes. The point is how well they fit together and inform the beautifully simple sentiment and melody. The version that closed the first side of the vinyl album is sensitively arranged beneath Robertson’s tender, mandolin-like guitar playing.

‘God’ is only mentioned once, at the outset, and the song has none of the rather tedious, unpleasant religiosity that blighted parts of the so called ‘born again trilogy’ of albums a few years down the line. In fact, ‘Forever Young’, a hymn of hope, has more in common with the lovely little chant, ‘Father Of Night’, the hymn of praise which ends his previous studio album, New Morning (1970).

When you turned the original record over you found a reprise of ‘Forever Young’, this time in a jaunty, hoedown tempo. I liked it well enough although thought it something of a makeweight. Ideally, a more simpatico take of ‘Nobody ‘Cept You’ might have made for a stronger programme, but one has to say that the sequencing on Planet Waves is nicely symmetrical. As on the first side, a cheerful, lively opener is followed by a much slower, darker proposition.

‘Dirge’ was, confusingly, titled ‘Dirge For Martha’ to begin with – quite who she might have been, no-one seems to know. It features just Dylan on piano and Robertson splintering notes out on an acoustic guitar. Dylan's ability on the piano may be only rudimentary, but he can be a highly effective player - as here, and Robertson’s playing is yet again exactly right, echoing the frustration and spite of the words. The song makes most sense to me when I hear Dylan’s powerful vocal addressing not a woman, not Sarah (let alone the mysterious Martha), but some personification of the gaping maw of stardom opening up before him once more as he prepares to put himself back in the market place. It might – more shakily – be compared to ‘Dear Landlord’ from John Wesley Harding (1967), a song probably addressed to his manager, Albert Grossman. Whoever or whatever the song is aimed at, its final couplet, is a telling admission of how bitterly conflicted Dylan must have been feeling when he wrote ‘Dirge’:-

            ‘Lady Luck, who shines on me, will tell you where I ’m at
I hate myself for loving you, but I should get over that.’
 
‘You Angel You’ is another fine ensemble performance and one of the  catchiest tracks. It may have been written with an eye on the chart and was released as the flip side of ‘On A Night Like This’, the lead single from the album which disappeared without trace, despite the perceived commercial appeal of both songs. ‘Dummy lyric’, or not, it might, with a country arrangement, have fitted snugly on Nashville Skyline. Nonetheless, on Planet Waves, it blends well with the overall sound of the record. 
 
‘Never Say Goodbye’, like most of the songs here, gets by without recourse to a conventional verse-chorus structure. A short song – there are no sprawling epics on this album – it is propelled by the rhythm section of Rick Danko on bass and Levon Helm on drums, and is over almost before you know it. It begins with this haunting verse:-


‘Twilight on the frozen lake,
A north wind about to break
On footprints in the snow
And silence down below’
 
The elemental geography of his Minnesota past is evoked again (that ‘twilight’ and ‘silence’ has stayed with me ever since I first heard it all those years ago) but, to be honest, the rest of the song, lovely listening experience that it is, fails to really live up to its opening. By Dylan’s standards, it proceeds as a fairly conventional love song, although the final verse fleetingly raises the ghosts of a couple of his earlier classics (‘Girl Of The North Country’ and It’s All Over Now, Baby Blue’) before fading away.
 
As the first half of the record ended with a love song for his children, so the second leaves us with a love song for his wife (well, hey, say I’m naive, but it is called ‘Wedding Song’…). It’s Dylan down to the bone, just him on acoustic guitar and harmonica, playing and singing in that uniquely authoritative way of his.
 
It’s both a declaration of the depth of his continuing love for and abiding gratitude to Sarah as well as a pledge of reassurance to her that his return to recording and touring won’t lead him back to the abyss. They can get through this, he sings, because ‘the past is gone’. In what is perhaps the album’s most quoted lyric, he restates his renouncement of that ‘Spokesman of a Generation’ soubriquet, telling Sarah and anyone else who cares to listen, that:_

‘It’s never been my duty to remake the world at large,
Nor is it my intention to sound the battle charge’
     
Back on Side One however, he has also told her that his ‘hand’s on the sabre’ although he may be willing to let her call the tune because she has ‘picked up the baton’ (‘Something There Is About You’). There seems to be a kind of desperation abroad here, amidst all the affirmation, and he fears that her love ‘burns him to the soul’ and cuts him ‘like a knife’. And yes, he loves her ‘more than blood’, but listen to the way he sings that phrase and you realise just how close we are to the most famous break-up record in the history of popular music. Blood On The Tracks waits in the wings, its wounds perhaps already opening up by the end of its predecessor.

   One of Barry Feinstein's series of shots of Dylan  
 with local kids in the streets of Liverpool, 1966.

                              * * * *  

Here’s how underrated Planet Waves is: Robbie Robertson, who as this article makes clear, is, after Dylan himself, the key musician on that record (and although no producer is named on the album, Robertson is credited with ‘Special Assistance’) was featured in the music press promoting a new album and looking back over his career. As I was at the time, in the middle of writing this piece, I checked out three of the quality magazines, ‘Mojo’, ‘Uncut’ and ‘The Word’. What I found was that Robertson’s stroll down Memory Lane recalled some of his solo and film work along with albums by The Bands as well as Dylan’s ’66 and ’74 tours and The Basement Tapes – but there was not a single mention of Planet Waves along the way.

Perhaps Robertson didn’t want to remind readers of an album that he helped to produce, but which has been criticised for its sound. After all, the critics have told us that you can actually hear Dylan’s jacket button scratching against his guitar on the first and only take of ‘Wedding Song’ - at least, you might be able to if you’re zeroing in through Bang & Olufsen speakers and headphones.  
 
 
N. B.
 
A fuller review of this album - and others - has already appeared in my article, 'Much To Reminisce; Bob Dylan's Most Underrated Albums' which was originally published in ISIS (issue 156 ), the international journal of all things Dylan. It can also be found in the 'Other Prose' section of this Angles & Reflections blog. 

C. IGR 2011 

 

Thursday, 4 July 2013

SPRING SONNET

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Now, as holy Spring does just that, right here
To rise and bring in the heathen new year,
Conservatory doors swing wide open -
So mow the grass as the leaves glow greener
And buds grow and brighten; hearts now lighten
And float on the warmer breeze cradling bees
And seashells hung high above bluebells chime:
Now, now, now, they ring out, now is the time!
There in our garden lair, we now retrieve
From their webbed slumber deep in the lumber
Of the musty, cool and dusty toolshed,
Alfresco table and chairs; find lanterns
With wine and music past later sunsets,
We agree: this is as good as it gets.


(2008)

Our garden isn't very big but it is secluded and south-facing. The front of the house is very dark for most of the day and consequently we spend a lot of time in the conservatory watching the seasons change. This poem is the first in a sequence of four sonnets about the seasons.

I think it's true that people tend to notice the natural world much more as they grow older. It's certainly the case for me and Spring, in particular, with its annual transformation, both imperceptible and sudden, never fails to inspire.

THE BLACK WATCH


 
 
 
 
 
 



 
 
 
Battery-powered, hour on hour,
Time tocks digitally, silently,
Slowly on my workaday wrist.
Clear of face and sober,
My Monday to Friday watch
Is a faithful old timekeeper
Who buses me to work
With morning Metro
For wake-up coffee,
As the great, grey grind
Begins again and again.

Then, on Monday to Thursday
Evenings which never become nights,
I watch tired TV on the somnolent sofa
And retire early to bed, early to rise,
Too weary to wipe sleep from bleary eyes.

Meanwhile, waiting all week long,
The strong black watch has been brooding
In the gewgaw and jewellery drawer,
Impatiently counting down the flight
To freedom and the heyday of Friday night.

Identical quartz disports
Time, ticks quickly, gallops
Apace on my latenight wrist.
Dark and mysterious,
My holiday-weekend watch
Converts must-do into want-to
And jets us to pleasure
With midnight vodka
Until Sunday’s Rose` glow
Glisters, gleams, grins
And beams golden again.

But bar, garden and conservatory
Drift blithely towards industry,
As Friday turns into Monday,
As candlelight turns to electricity
And music and talk turn to work and TV.

Willing old workwatch, up every weekday,
Heaves the leaden hours all the way
Down through the tunnel to the light of payday;
But dark in the drawer, soon to make hay,
Our thrilling, deadly nightwatch waits to play.


(2007)

I have two watches, both of them presents from Lise, both the same model, but one of them clear of face with a brown strap for weekdays and the other black of face and strap for the weekends. They provide a neat little object lesson in the relativity of time.
 

 

BORED YESTERDAY (LARKINESQUE)












So – one day nearer the grave, then?
Poor unnecessary little sod;
I have to say I find it odd
How we keep having kids when
Most that you’ll do in this first year
Is simply kip and crap and cry
As you’ll do again, as you near
That day when you get old and die.

In between: boredom, betrayal.
Most things you’ll try, you’re bound to fail.

Hospital, birth, school, work, hospital, death,
(And don’t talk to me of love and marriage –
They go together like gun and cartridge)
It’s barely worth drawing another breath.

Life fucks you up, then fucks you down –
Why wave, just bloody well drown!

(1994)

In an uncharacteristically joyful and life-affirming moment, Philip Larkin once wrote a poem called ‘Born Yesterday’ to celebrate the birth of a child born to his friend Kingsley Amis. Then he got back to being The Master of Misery. However, like other arch-miserabilists such as Leonard Cohen and Morrissey, Larkin’s work is often very funny – and that’s what I’ve tried to capture in this little tribute.

Apologies for the effing and blinding but, if you consult PL’s poem ‘This Be The Verse’, you’ll see why. Apologies also to Stevie Smith for kidnapping her most famous title for my punchline.

The picture is one of the last taken of Larkin and possibly the only one of him laughing. He was librarian at Leicester university back in the 1940s when there were only about 200 students, you know...

EASTERN PROMISE (BETJEMANESQUE)














Oh, Miss Mistry, charming new head of school P.E.,
You do, I confess, have an alarming effect on me!
Skilled at hockey, swimming, rounders and netball, too,
In the staffroom, I can’t keep my eyes off be-shorted you.
Praise be, Lord Krishna, for bringing you here to Kent
From darkest Bradford, just north-west of mystic orient.
Oh, your sweaty brown forearms shine like buttered toast
And oh, those sturdy thighs, juicy no doubt, as Sunday roast –
But these are English images – I’d much rather
Dream of you as a tastier dish: my chick masala!
Let me promise to spoil you so very nicely –
Even if you turn out to be only half as spicey.
Oh, dark and dusky, pretty Miss Preeti Mistry,
Would you, could you, fall for a middle-aged Head of History?


(1994)

Another homage. Betjeman and Larkin are two of my favourite English poets and I learnt much from them both – particularly the value of being concise and using everyday language when occasion calls for it (as it often does).

Like Larkin, Betjeman can also be very funny and there are quite a few of his poems that inspired the one above, but perhaps most notably, ‘A Subaltern’s Love-Song’.

CHANT OF THE APOCALYPSE
















Kill, eat, breed, sleep.
Our time is dear but life is cheap;
All that we sow, prepare to reap;
Mountain high, ocean deep.

The apple is bitten and the rainforest dies;
Cadillac overtakes and the ozone layer fries:
Can’t take the truth so double-think it into lies.

Species cannibalized, poisoned, clubbed and shot;
Another one bites the dust, then another, so what?
Get out of the kitchen if you can’t stand it so hot.

Kill, eat, breed, sleep.
Our time is dear but life is cheap;
All that we sow, prepare to reap;
Mountain high, ocean deep.

We all just want another hit, another thrill,
So foul the seas as gulls dive over that landfill.
Meanwhile, Mother Nature moves in for the kill.

Waste and weapons of mass destruction pile up steep;
Can’t disarm – too far an imaginative leap;
It’s much too late to laugh now, get ready to weep.

Kill, eat, breed, sleep.
Our time is dear but life is cheap;
All that we sow, prepare to reap;
Mountain high, ocean deep.

In heat one last time, the rabid hellhound breaks jail
And with its bitch of money, chases its own tail.
Now shares plunge as the price of profit bleeds us pale.

Life is short, love is sweet but hatred is bitter:
Only the strong survive, you better get fitter.
All you own turns to trash, your cash into litter.

Kill, eat, breed, sleep.
Our time is dear but life is cheap;
All that we sow, prepare to reap;
Mountain high, ocean deep.

Like always, imperialist forces invade
And, for sure, the rich will exploit the poor with trade.
Now suicide-bombers explode out of the shade.

Don’t want no eye for an eye or no tooth for a tooth;
Thousands of years later, still waiting for the truth:
Billions of believers and not a single shred of proof.

Simply won’t read the writing wailing on the wall;
Just go forth and multiply and come one, come all:
We’ll all be refugees soon, here comes that final fall.

Kill, eat, breed, sleep.
Our time is dear but life is cheap;
All that we sow, prepare to reap;
Mountain high, ocean deep.

Here’s capitalism’s reason and rhyme:
The greatest amount of profit
For the least amount of people
In the shortest possible time.

Kill, eat, breed, sleep.
Our time is dear but life is cheap;
All that we sow, prepare to reap;
Mountain high, ocean deep.

Here’s capitalism’s reason and rhyme:
The greatest amount of profit
For the least amount of people
In the shortest possible time.


(2008)

Sometimes you just despair of the world – or should that be, despair for the world.
This seems timely, given the continuing global financial crisis and impending General Election in the UK.

It’s not so much a poem, more a Rant & Roll song – a lyric, at any rate. If anybody out there would like to give it a tune, well, you know how to reach me. I always thought Bob Dylan’s 1965 song, ‘It’s Alright, Ma, I’m Only Bleeding’ was a tremendous piece of polemic – and it may be a distant inspiration for the above.

SHOWER & STORM INTERLUDE













May,
And a pink, trodden snow of blossomfall in the road black with rain;
Me in this avenue,
Rambling back from the old college, trying to induce a dim brain
To think of something new.

Evening in this avenue,
Where the trees drip and glisten in the close vacuum of a deep day
Beneath an ocean on high.

Down deep in the avenue
Becalmed with glinting cars and glowing curtains, the starless darkness
Drifts down a boundless heaven.

Now,
In a silence less soundless than profound, these my homeward feet pause,
This my pageward hand stirs;
And then suddenly in the electric sky a dark dragon roars,
Awesome and mountainous.


(1977)

About the drama of the creative process. Conceived on the way back through Spring showers from Scraptoft College to my first matrimonial home, a flat on Sykefield Avenue, Leicester.

I took the landscape photograph on that very avenue the other day. It hasn’t changed much – just more parked cars. 

FOSSE PARK


















Still the same.
And yet different.
Better perhaps. Greener.
More trees than when I first played here
Half a century ago.

The children’s playground
More varied and safer
Than when Georgie Smith
Fell from the high swings.
His blood still there a week later.

Those swings long gone -
And the hut where Harold,
The straight-backed park-keeper,
Forbidding in his uniform,
Dubious with his glass eye
And the other on the little girls,
Drank tea with his epileptic gardener.

The toilets – ‘Gents’ at one end,
‘Ladies’ at the other - and the shelter
Half-way (romantically known
As ‘The Arbour’) - all gone too,
Due to graffiti, vandalism and various
Misbehaviour, I suppose, but look:

The brook and circle of elms in the middle
Are still there and the wrought iron railings
Where Paul Botterell impaled his leg:
They still fence the terraced perimeter,
And ring with the echoes of the stick
That I’d clatter along on my way home.

My childhood came alive here,
A stone’s throw away from the unhappy house;
It was my first route of escape
And for ten years this park was my second home.

How many balls did I chase towards the jacketed goal
And how many bat away from the bicycle wicket?
How much water did I drink from the tap
Behind one of the great oaks
With George and Chris and Geoff?

I can taste that water now,
Feel it cooling my hot boy’s face.
I can see the old men playing chess
Under the trees at the top of the hill,
(Like in that song about another park),
And the kids queuing at the tinkling ice-cream van.
I can smell the new-mown grass making me sneeze
Where we loll with our portable pirate radios
As the psychedelic pop songs of the mid-sixties
Stream like butterflies on the rippling evening breeze.

I used to lose track of time there -
Or maybe time lost track of me.
When I left home and school,
Time would quickly find me,
The park soon left behind me.
Since then, life has been
Both cruel and kind to me,
But the park remains to remind me
Of the roots here that will always bind me.


(2009)


Nostalgia set in very early for me and I tried to write this poem several times without success over the years, so I was pleased when it was finally finished. The song alluded to in the eighth stanza is Jimmy Webb’s ‘MacArthur Park’ (‘the old men playing checkers by the trees’). It was a worldwide hit for the Irish actor, Richard Harris during the Summer of 1968, by which time my tenure at the park was just about over.

THE FLIGHT OF THE MONARCHS















It is September in a corner
Of Lake Eyrie in Canada
And, until now, this place
Has been the whole world
To billions of their kind.
They have never ventured
More than a few hundred yards
But now, as the cold inches in,
Some genetic memory urges them
Beyond this cooling microcosm
To turn their wings southward;
And now they are soaring
Like Autumn in reverse
And filling the sky with a golden sunset.

Gorged on nectar and guided by the sun,
They will fly two thousand miles
To a patch of shrinking forest,
High in the mountains of Mexico,
Where they will hang in dense clusters
Through the long night of winter.
Some will drop and perish in the frost below
Whilst some fall prey to the few birds
Immune to their protective poison.
Most, though, will survive to wake
And drink at the renewed river;
Drifting down to ground
Like Spring in reverse,
Before filling the sky with a golden sunrise.


(2009)

Over the years, I’ve watched all of David Attenborough’s TV series about the natural world. This poem was inspired by one of the stories about migration in the last one.

I read a newspaper article recently in which DA was warning about the widespread decline in the world’s butterfly population. And then there’s the alarming fall in bee-colonies – not to mention the thousands of other species at risk. Many of us are, I think, complacent about environmental issues and whilst we may feel sorry that there are only a few pandas and tigers left, we assume that most of the natural world is simply too profuse to be at real risk. Well, drastic reductions in species like bees and butterflies should give us pause for thought.

It’s worth remembering that, back in the last Ice Age, human beings had almost certainly dwindled to very small numbers indeed. Our own species was probably perpetuated by a mere few thousand, or even hundreds, of its kind. We’re lucky to still be here at all and should take more care of what is left

SEASIDE


 
 
                                                                          Midnight
On the slow-wind beach
And the hungry sea
Licks black sand.
Moonlight
And me,
Throwing stones,
The way people do
On lonely beaches,
A stone’s throw
Away from the town;
Lonely people,
Making sinking splashes
As the long tongue of sea
Licks grey sand.
A bloody ribbon of sky,
Distant
In tattered blackness;
And me
On the cold-wind beach
At first light.

(1975)
 
Writers need to ‘find their own voice’ and this is one of the first poems in which I felt I’d shaken off, if only temporarily, the powerful influences that had inspired me to write in the first place.
The beach in question was somewhere in Wales; possibly Rhyl.
The photograph is a recent one and was taken overlooking the beach at New Brighton, a few miles north of Liverpool. We’d hopped on a train to go and see the sunset there and spotted the lone figure you see in the picture.